Online Feedback: Manuscript Development

Linda Funnell

24 August to 9 October, online

Full Price: $500
Member: $350
Conc Member: $300

Do you have a draft fiction manuscript? Are you looking for feedback and tips to improve your work?

In this online course, editor Linda Funnell will provide feedback on your manuscript (up to a total of 7500 words) in an online classroom environment, enabling you to hone your skills over six weeks.

You’ll also give and receive peer feedback, and be able to consider the tutor’s feedback across all your fellow-writers’ submissions. The tutor’s feedback will focus on specific areas for each of three submissions, as outlined below.

Is this course right for you? Read our FAQ >

Every fortnight over six weeks, you’ll submit 2500 words of your manuscript.

For the first submission, you’ll submit the opening 2500 words of your manuscript. We will look at how your manuscript begins, focussing on specific areas including what hooks you’ve planted to keep readers turning the pages and the characters you’ve introduced.

In the second submission, our focus is on characters, dialogue and point of view. If you aren’t using dialogue, choose part of the manuscript where we see your protagonist through their actions.

The third submission is your opportunity to select 2500 words of your manuscript that you would particularly like feedback on and to ask a specific question about it. For example, you might be concerned whether a character’s motivation is clear, or whether a particular action is obvious – or too obvious!  If you don’t have a particular question and would just like some general feedback, that’s fine too.

Your tutor will provide tailored feedback on each submission, and you’ll also have the opportunity to read and comment on other participants’ writing. You’ll be given guidance on the best way to give feedback and specific questions to focus on in each round of submissions. Giving feedback on others’ work is a great way to sharpen your eye on your own work.

This online course takes place on a website specifically designed for writers, making it simple and easy to share your writing, give and receive feedback, and interact with fellow writers.

If you’re ready to challenge yourself and develop your skills through constructive critique, this is the course for you. Please note, while you are welcome to generate new material for submission during this time, no prompts or themes will be provided.

Participant Requirements

Internet access and confidence using basic computer software are essential for this course. Please read our FAQ before enrolling>>

You must have a completed manuscript draft to enrol. This course is designed for writers of fiction. If you have a narrative non-fiction manuscript and are interested in enrolling in this course, please contact us to discuss.

This course starts on 24 August with enrolment into our online classroom. Submissions are due on the following dates:

31 August
14 September
28 September

After each submission date, you’ll have 11 days to complete peer feedback. At the end of each feedback period, you’ll receive your tutor feedback.

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Online Feedback: Manuscript Development


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