Fiction Assessments
Camha Pham
Do you need expert insight to help your manuscript reach its full potential? Do you need advice on character, story, dialogue, tone, pacing, or style? In a one-hour session, one of our industry-experienced manuscript assessors will provide guidance to help your manuscript reach its full potential.
What should I expect?
This is an opportunity to discuss your work-in-progress with our industry-experienced assessors. Feedback may cover topics such as plot, structure, character development, dialogue, pace, point of view, voice, tone, style and/or readership. Though your synopsis is provided as a guide for the assessor, the assessor may provide feedback on it as relevant.
You will receive a brief written summary of the assessor’s key feedback points; however, you will not receive edits on your manuscript submission. This one-on-one meeting is a chance to discuss issues and potential solutions, and to ask questions.
All of our assessments are either carried out via Zoom/phone call or in-person at our building in Callan Park, Sydney. This will be made clear when you choose your time slot.
Please note: There is a limit of one booking per person.
Is my manuscript eligible?
Our assessors will accept adult fiction manuscripts in any genre. Please note, short story collections are not eligible for our manuscript assessments. For feedback on short stories, we recommend our online short story courses.
If you’re writing non-fiction, such as memoir, self-help, cookbooks, travel or instruction books, please see our non-fiction assessments.
If you’re writing YA, please see our YA assessments.
Next dates:
- Thursday 22 May 2025, with Camha Pham – via Zoom/Phone
- If this date doesn’t work for you, Join the waitlist for future Fiction Manuscript Assessments (please specify that you are looking for a ‘fiction’ manuscript assessment).
Submission requirements
You will need to provide the following in one document at least 10 days before your assessment:
- the first 4000 words of your manuscript*
- a one-page synopsis, up to 300 words (need help with your synopsis? Please see our guide to writing a synopsis)
- a brief writing CV including a statement of goals for this manuscript, no more than one page
*Please note that if your manuscript excerpt exceeds the word limit, it will be truncated at 4000 words before being forwarded to the assessor. Please respect the time the assessor is dedicating to reading your work by sticking to the industry standard formatting and word limit. Thank you.
Submitting your work
Once you have paid for your appointment, you will need to submit your materials at least 10 days before your assessment as one document in MS Word format. Your document must be formatted to industry standards, as follows:
- Line spacing: 1.5 or double
- Font: Times New Roman
- Size: 12 pt
- Margins: minimum 3 cm all round (Word default margins are fine)
- Paragraphing: indent all paragraphs except the first paragraph of a new chapter or section; only put spaces between paragraphs where you wish to indicate a section break
- Text should be range left (which means the right edge is ‘ragged’), not justified
- Page numbers: consecutive from beginning to end
You can submit your document via our submission form.
Please note: There is a limit of one booking per person.
Cancellation Policy
Your enrolment is non-refundable. If you should wish to withdraw from a manuscript assessment, you must inform Writing NSW at least fourteen days in advance of the assessment to receive a full credit. Withdrawals up to seven days prior to the assessment will be eligible for a 50% credit. Withdrawals in the week prior to the assessment are ineligible for credit.
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Reviews
‘… a supportive and enlightening assessment. [Camha] really helped break down the daunting task of crafting a synopsis (something I loathe writing) and gave me tools to view it from a new perspective. I also really appreciated her kindness, warmth and encouragement; something all writers need from time to time.’ – Lisa
I found the session extremely helpful! Camha really took the time to ease into the session and made me very comfortable from the beginning. She gave her overall impressions and really broke down the feedback well addressing all areas of improvement. I also liked that she offered suggestions that she believed would make it stronger. The full hour was well spent, I felt like everything was addressed. There was time for proper discussion and questions that I had. Really great experience! – Celine
